Kagura..Souhja

[Holly's Bratty Lil Bro]

Name:haru
Age:8
How far are you in the manga?:umm...book 1?
Do you have any previous experience RPing?:nu
If so, where? (only a few examples):nu
Character you desire:Kagura Sohma
Who do you want this character to end up with? (if anyone):because she wants to kill ykou and so do i
Why do you want this character? Explain: cause
Character's personality:mad
3rd person RPing example (10-15 lines):Kagura
went
over
to
Shigure's
house
to
find
kyou-kun
she
then
found
kyou
and
she
started
chasing
him
while
he
was
running
away.
She
then
grabbed
him
and he
died.
How often can you be on?:5 minutes everyweek
How dedicated can you be to this forum?:umm...

[~♥Sapphire♥~]

ROFL oh little haru..haur..ahru ahru..You make tons of mistakes
Just because you skipped lines in every word, doesn't make it a line :/
and read your questions carefully..carefully
See thats why Kelly doesn't want you coming with us to go to places, because you are so darn stupid >.<
in others words..THAT SUCKED XD

[Roxy]

I'm sorry, this application has been declined as well. To start, you need to at least be caught up with the English release of the manga - volume 13 - though it is preferable you are through chapter 110. Next, though I suspect what you put in the 'who do you want this character to end up with' part is meant for the 'why do you want this character,' not only is it inaccurate - Kagura does not want to kill Kyou, it is merely her way of expressing her love, and she doesn't do it anymore at the current point, even in the English release - it is not a good reason. You did not explain her personality at all, and it was wrong; she is not 'mad', she just has a unique way of expressing herself. Also, your sample RP...putting one word on each line does not make it a full line. 10-15 lines means 10-15 complete lines. And you did not show Kagura at all, not to mention the part at the end with Kyou dying was completely out of context. 5 minutes per week is not enough time, and you still haven't told me how dedicated you can be. Finally, you still appear not to have read the rules. Also, I see your grammar and spelling has still not improved.